jere311086

Bonjour à vous tous :

je suis en train d'essayer de préparer une présentation pour mon cours hebdomadaire d'anglais . J'ai choisi de présenter Apple.
j'ai tenter d'écrire quelques phrase concernant l'historique mais je suis confronté à de nombreux problèmes nottament pour traduire certaine parties.
Est ce quelqu'un peut m'aider à traduire ce qui me manque et, si possible, corriger l'ensemble
Merci d'avance .

Apple is a company whose the activity is to manufacture personal computers. It was founded by Steve Jobs, Steve Wozniak and Ronald Wayne on April 1st, 1976 to Cupertido in California.
With inventions like the mouse or icons Apple is regarded as one of the founders of computer science (of) today.
Having dominated the 80's, Apple was exceeded in the 90 by Microsoft. But with new products like iMac and the opening of new markets Apple knows again a great success.
Let's products are made history:

The Apple I was made by Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak in the garage and sold through word of mouth. It was one of the first personal computers to be designed to be combined with a keyboard and a monitor for display. Some two hundred units were produced but success was such that they could not meet all the demand.

The Apple II was unveiled to the public in April 1977 and became a phenomenal success. It was the first computer in color, and it was sold several million copies.[fut vendus à plusieurs millions d’exemplaires].
The economic power of Apple became without equal and many employees were fortune. [La puissance économique d’Apple devint sans égales et des dizaines d’employés firent fortune].

In 1981, and despite some flaws in the beginning, the Macintosh is finally a success. The company’s success [dura] ten years.

Faced with growing competition from the PC machines whose offering prices increasingly reduced, Apple is innovating less and found it difficult to increase sales. The Power Mac Intosh is a failure, and Microsoft spends far ahead. This is a difficult period for Apple and many employees will be laid off.

In 1998, the iMac is a big break for Apple with technological innovations and an original design. The iMac is a success with 800000 units sold in one year. Apple is revived again and competes with Microsoft.

Continuing with the innovation, the brand has since diversified: she opened a shop selling music online iTunes Music Store, it launched its digital Walkman [baladeur numérique] iPod and, in 2007, his mobile phone Iphone.

The_FD

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Apple is a company which activity is to manufacture personal computers. It was founded by Steve Jobs, Steve Wozniak and Ronald Wayne on April 1st, 1976 in Cupertido, California.
With inventions like the mouse or icons, Apple is considered as one of the founders of the computer science of today.
Having dominated the 80's, Apple was exceeded in the 90's by Microsoft. But with new products like the iMac and the opening of new markets, Apple is having a great success again.

Let's products are made history: (??? j'ai pas compris le sens du titre)

The Apple I was made by Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak in a garage and sold through word of mouth. It was one of the first personal computers designed to be combined with a keyboard and a monitor for display. Some two hundred units were produced, but success was such that they could not meet the demand.

The Apple II was unveiled to the public in April 1977 and became a phenomenal success. It was the first computer to display colors, and several millions of copies were sold . The economic power of Apple became without equal and many employees made a fortune.

In 1981, and despite some flaws at the beginning, the Macintosh was finally a success. The company’s success will last ten years.

Facing the growing competition from the PC machines, which offered prices increasingly reduced, Apple was innovating less and hardly increased its sales. The Power MacIntosh was then a failure, and Microsoft was far ahead. This is was a difficult period for Apple and many employees have been laid off.

In 1998, the iMac was a big break for Apple with technological innovations and an original design. The iMac was a success with 800000 units sold in one year. It is Apple revival, and competition with Microsoft starts over again.

Continuing with innovations, the brand has since diversified: it opened a shop selling music online: iTunes Music Store, it launched its digital Walkman, the iPod and, in 2007, its mobile phone Iphone.

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jere311086

"Let's products are made history: (??? j'ai pas compris le sens du titre)"

En fait c'était pour faire un genre de transition: et maintenant voyons les produits qui ont fait son histoire.

En tous cas merci pour l'aide apporté !

The_FD

how about

let's move to the products that made Macintosh history

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jere311086

Bonsoir, je suis toujour sur ce foutu exposé sur apple. J'essai de sortir une petit paragraphe sur l'iphone (c'est d'actuallité), et ça donne ca:

Much anticipated in the world, Iphone had a great success since its release in France in October and is already the star for Christmas.

The Apple's marketing operation is a success, but some criticize the poor technical quality of the mobile phone:

For the success: the Iphone [interface] is easy and intuitive, there is no button. The design is revolutionary and completely "made in apple." The Iphone integrates the iPod; you can listen to music as a walkman. We can surf on the Internet like with a mobile computer and the Iphone can connect to a wifi.

In terms of criticism, the Iphone does not have a high level of autonomy and the battery cannot be changed. There is no keyboard, and the manipulations are difficult if you have large hands. The camera is not powerful. The Iphone can only be used with the operator Orange.

J'espere ne pas avoir fait de contresens, si quelqu'un veut bien me corriger cela

Merci d'avance

MikeL