Funky.babs

Bonjour à tous, je consulte ce forum depuis quelques temps pour traduire des pharses, mais là je ne sais pas quoi mettre ! Je dois envoyer un mail, avec une formule de politesse adaptée.

Voici le mail :
"Good morning,
I am sorry for my english, I am french.
I am in second year of PhD. I work on interactions between pollen and pollutants.
With my gang (from Laboratoire of CE, France), we are interested in yours products, in particular in yours pollens.
On your website, you sell "pollen allergens". Do you sell pollens ? I am interested on whole pollens, not just their allergens.
How much cost these pollens ? I need heavy quantities, about 100g of differents pollen species. I would like a approximative price."

Quelle est la formule de politesse appropriée à la fin ?
Pourriez-vous m'indiquer les (nombreuses j'imagine) fautes ?
Merci d'avance !
Floriane

bentayeb nacera

"Good morning,
I am sorry for my English, I am French.I am in second year PhD.
I work on interactions between pollens and pollutants.
I am in a Laboratory group of CE in France, we are interested in your products particularly your pollens.
On your website, you sell "pollen allergens". Do you sell all kinds pollens ? I am interested in all kinds pollens, not just allergens.
How much do these pollens cost? I need heavy quantities, about 100g of differents pollen species. I would like an approximative price."

sincerely yours,
Floriane

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nacera:

Shall I compare berberber to shining stars?
Thou art more friendly and more tolerate:
The friends do say the ideas of their minds
And me hath to say too in any date

Funky.babs

C'est très aimable de m'avoir répondu aussi vite, merci beaucoup !
Floriane

jierbe31

I would've written ...all kinds OF allergens ... and differenT (without an S) pollen species.

Funky.babs

Thanks
I wrote "Do you sell entire pollens ?" so it's OK about "kinds of"
But I wrote "differents pollen species", oups (I send it )

Thanks to bentayeb nacera and jierbe31

bentayeb nacera

Hy jierbe31,
yes of course, I forgot the preposition "of" and I didn't notice the "s" of the adj. next time I will be more attentive. fortunately, jierbe31 is present

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nacera:

Shall I compare berberber to shining stars?
Thou art more friendly and more tolerate:
The friends do say the ideas of their minds
And me hath to say too in any date

jierbe31

Never mind, I do know nobody's perfect!