cath287

Salut tout le monde,
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ça svp

The cotton growing is the biggest polluant growing. On estime qu’elle contamine 25 millions de personnes chaque année et qu’elle pollue les sols, l’air, les eaux

Indeed these growing use 24 per cent of pesticide in the world whereas they represent only 2,4 per cent of agricultural area. They estimate that it contaminates 25 million of person every year and that it ppollutes ground, air and water. Peoples who live on the growing are first victims. In India, a lot of pesticides are used. For instance, in this country DDT is used. In Mexico, there is 17 pesticides used are forgotten in Europe. There is a lot of disaster with cotton growing, in fact for example Aral See is 80% more small than 18 years ago.

With organic cotton growing, peoples are less in danger because there is any pesticide. Morever this growing needed more employee than traditional cotton growing.

To manufacture the tee-shirt Fidji, Ideo works with two producers. Both are based on India. The first is the cotton producer and the second make gardments.

Dye respect european stanards and into there is any heavy metal. When the garment is white, any chlorine is used. Some dyeing used by Ideo are herbal. In herbal dyeing there is plants, which are medical virtues.

Silkscreen printing used by Ideo are with water and each silkscreen printing are with environment or social messages.

Merci tout plein
bisous
Cath

mathieu9512

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jierbe31

Bonjour,

(0) Cotton growing is the biggest polluting culture.

Indeed this growing uses 24 per cent of pesticides in the world whereas it only represents 2.4 per cent of agricultural area. It is estimated that it contaminates 25 million persons every year and pollutes ground, air and water. People who live on such growing are the first victims. In India, a lot of pesticides are used. For instance DDT is used in this country. In Mexico 17 pesticides are used which are forbidden<=(Je suppose) in Europe. There is a lot of disaster with cotton growing. For example the Aral Sea is actually 80% smaller than 18 years ago.

With organic cotton growing, people are less endangered because there is no pesticide. Morever this growing needs more employees than traditional cotton growing.

To manufacture the tee-shirt Fidji, Ideo works with two producers. Both are based in India. The first one is the cotton producer and the second one makes garments.

Dye respects European standards and there is no heavy metal in it. When the garment is white, no chlorine is used. Some dyes used by Ideo are herbal. In herbal dyeing there are plants,(of course!) which have medical virtues.

Silkscreen printing used by Ideo are with water and each silkscreen printing brings out environmental or social messages.

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