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POLLS · 12-04-2005, 12:36 PM

bonjour, j'aurai besoin d'une correction d'anglais s'il vous plait car je pense (je sais )que j'ai beaucoup de faute Merci
1)What is said in the text which we permit to guess the contents of the song is all the contect of racism and slaves ot the time. Billie Holiday have written a commited song "Strange Fruit " because it reminded her of the way her father had died. So it is a protest against slavery.

2) As Billie 's song reminded her of the way her father had died, we can imagine that Bille had written her song on real event that her father have undergo. So we imagine that her father was killed by the lyncher of Ku Klux Klan who hung up negroes in trees for let them rot like fruit. And perhaps she have seen the scene when she was young.

NAR · 12-04-2005, 01:45 PM

Bonjour!

J'ai corrigé le texte et voici ce que ça donne

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1)What is said in the text which we permit to guess the contents of the song is all the contect of racism and slaves ot the time. Billie Holiday have written a commited song "Strange Fruit " because it reminded her of the way her father had died. So it is a protest against slavery.

1. The slavery and racism referred to in the text bring us to ponder over the content of the song. The song Billie Holiday wrote, entitled ‘Strange Fruit’, which reminds her of the way her father died is a cry of revolt against slavery.

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2) As Billie 's song reminded her of the way her father had died, we can imagine that Bille had written her song on real event that her father have undergo. So we imagine that her father was killed by the lyncher of Ku Klux Klan who hung up negroes in trees for let them rot like fruit. And perhaps she have seen the scene when she was young.

2. It is quite possible that Billie’s song describes the events her father actually experienced since the song reminds her of her father’s death. We imagine that her father was killed by the lyncher of Ku Klux Klan who hung negroes on trees and let them decay like fruits. Perhaps as well that she witnessed the scene when she was young.

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POLLS Junior Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 20 POLLS is an unknown character at this point	aide :corrigé bonjour, j'aurai besoin d'une correction d'anglais s'il vous plait car je pense (je sais )que j'ai beaucoup de faute Merci 1)What is said in the text which we permit to guess the contents of the song is all the contect of racism and slaves ot the time. Billie Holiday have written a commited song "Strange Fruit " because it reminded her of the way her father had died. So it is a protest against slavery. 2) As Billie 's song reminded her of the way her father had died, we can imagine that Bille had written her song on real event that her father have undergo. So we imagine that her father was killed by the lyncher of Ku Klux Klan who hung up negroes in trees for let them rot like fruit. And perhaps she have seen the scene when she was young.
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