wididy

Bonjour !

Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger un petit essai en anglais. J'ai essayé de trouver mes fautes ( j'ai misen gras ce qui me semblait faux mais il doit certainement rester encore des fautes): le voici:

I think rules are very important for the respect of each other. It's ought to put rules in every school. If there were not these rules, there wouldn't be respect.
For example the rule number eight, that explains us that it's forbidden to walk on the right in corridors, because there could be some rushes.
To my mind, these rules are important they keep the order in the school.
In the document "Yellowston park" the park ranger tells to visitors they had not better to run away if they meet a bear. He tells also them tha if the bear attacks, they should fall to the ground and play dead.
As far as I’m concerned, these rules must be used to warn the visitors from the danger.
In our class, we have to do our homeworks everyday. In my opinion, it’s a good thing because our level will be better in the end of this year than in the beginning.

Merci de votre aide et à bientôt !

Nemesis 5.4

Bon j'ai changé pas mal d'expressions mais voilà ce que ça pourrait donner :

I think rules are very important to assure the respect of each other. Rules should be established in every school because without rules there would be no respect.
For example the rule number eight, which mentions that it's forbidden to walk on the right in corridors because there could be some rushes.
To my mind, these rules are important because they maintain order in school. In the document "Yellowston park" the park ranger tells to visitors they better not to run away if they meet a bear (t'a commencé au présent donc tu continues au présent). He also tells them that in case/if the bear attacks, they shall fall to the ground and play dead. (perso je trouve ça un peu weird mais je paux pas te dire peut etre que c'est juste)/act (/behave) as if they were dead. As far as I’m concerned these rules must be used to warn visitors from the danger.
In our class, we have to do our homeworks everyday. In my opinion it’s a good thing because it makes us improve our level so that in the end of the year it'll be better than it actually is.

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wididy

Merci encore nemesis !