POLLS

Bonjour à tous! j'ai fais une petite expression écrite et je voulais savoir si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger Merci beaucoup

Music and the songs are more and more presents in our daily life and (et y ont un pouvoir ...) here are a power very important
Indeed, we regain music (aussi bien)as well at home than in our car, in ours portables. Music influence a lot on our moral : we can listen it when we are sad, for relax, or for play. So, music surround us (la musiq nous entoure)
Nevertheless, the songs and music can be the subjects of a revolt or humanitarian cause. It is on of means (c'est un des moyens) the more efficients for express and to be listened to all. In this way, we can collect some back or militate in favour of politic causes against war , like the Woodstock Festival .
We can conclude than the sangs and music could be also a politic power than moral.

chiara410

Music and the songs = c'est [Music and songs] sans the.

(et y ont un pouvoir ...) = and they've got a very important power.
mais je ne sais pas si power est la mot juste.

in ours portables= sans la s = in our portables.

Music influence = avec la s ici ! = Music influences

we can listen it = le verb listen veut 'to' toujours = we can listen to it .

je vais essayer :

Music and songs are more and more present in our daily life and and they've got a very important power.
Indeed, we (?)regain (?) music at home as we do in our cars and in our portables.
Music influences a lot our moral : we can listen to it when we are sad, for relaxing or for playing. So, music surrounds us.
Nevertheless, the songs and the music can be the subjects of a (?)revolt (?) or humanitarian causes. they are the most efficient means to express yourself and can be listened by all.
This way, we can collect some back (?) or militate in favour of political causes against war , like the Woodstock Festival .
We can conclude that songs and music could be also a political power than moral. (?)(je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire ici)

POLLS

je voulais savoir que représentait vos ?
sinon pour "Indeed, we regain music " je voulais dire" en effet , on retrouve la musique aussi bien chez nous que ..." est ce que la traduction est bonne ?

chiara410

mes (?) veullent dire que je comprends pas la mot en ce context.

pet-etre que avec la mot 'revolt' tu voulais dire 'revolution' ?

et ici tu veux dire quoi? we can collect some back (?) qu'est que c'est back ici?

tu peux dire alors :
Indeed, we find music at home as we do in our cars and in our portables.

ou tu pourrais écrire :
Indeed, we listen to music at home ....


Je pense que ma traduction est bonne,
mais je ne suis pas anglaise vraiment (j'habitais a Londres et je le parle bien).
j'éspere que j'ai te aidè.

POLLS

oui merci beaucoup pour ton aide

NAR