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Old 10-03-2004, 05:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Do you think discrimination against disabled people can be compared to other forms of discrimination ?

To my mind, discrimination against disabled people and others form of discrimination like racism had taken root in difference.
A mon avis, la discrimination comme les personne handicapée et les autres formes de racisme comme le racisme, ont pris racine dans la difference.

One hand, discrimination against disabled people ant others forms had a lot of together point .
In fact, disabled people and other person suffer from to can't leave as a "normal " person
D'un coté, la discrimination contre les personne handicapée et les autre formes de discrimination ont beaucoup de points communs. En effet, les personnes hadicapées et les autres personnes souffrent de ne pas pouvoir vivre comme les autre
For example:
A personn who is disabled found any place of parking or have a trouble.
Moreovre in the world of work, it is difficult when you are disabled, because some esthablissement have got necessary struture for wich be accessible for disabled person.
Also discrimination against Blacks is hard. Blacks people couldn't entred in the same bus than a whites. They hadn't the same rights and was slave. Whites had rights of leaf or death on a Black . Is this really to be free that ?
In the world of works, personn is select on his name.
Par exemple, une personne qui est handicapé ne trouve pas de place de parking ou tres difficilement . De plus dans le monde du travail, c'est difficile quand on est handicapé, car seulement quelques etablissement ont les structure necessaire pour etre accessible aux personnes handicapés.
De plus la discriminations contres les personne Noirs est tres dur. Les personnes Noirs ne pouvaient pas entré dans le meme bus qu'un Blanc. Ils n'avaient pas les meme droit et etaient des esclaves. Les Blancs avaient un droit de vie ou de mort sur les Noirs. Est ce reellement etre libres ?

Les personnes ont peur, peur de ne pas voir leurs reflets au travers des yeux des autres.C'est l'inconnu qui fait peur aux gens, ils comprennent pas qu'une personne puissent etre differente d'eux ( je n'arrive pas a traduire cette phrase , les temps des verbes me gene )

However discrimination against disabled people have always be less violente that racism. Racism have kill a lot personn, like the most know: Ku Kux Klan. This group killed Blacks people but moreover the afrraid Blacks when they burned theirs house at night.
De plus la discrimination contre les personnes handicapé a toujours etait moins violente que le racisme.Racisme a tuer beaucoup de personne, comme les plus connu:KKK . Ce groupe a pas seulement tuer les Noirs mais aussi les a effrayer en mettant le feu a leurs maison dans la nuit .

So we can conclud that discrimination against disabled people can be compared to other forms of discrimination, because this discrimination is base on physical and difference, they have all suffert.
But, we have to juge of degree of this discrimination and on his strength.
Although disabled people have suffer, people who is victim of racism had pay with his life this difference .
Nous pouvons donc conclure que la discrimination contre les personnes handicapés peut etre comparé aux autres formes de discrimination , car cette discrimination est basé sur le physique et la difference, et tous ont souffert.
Mais, nous devons juger du degres de cette discrimination et de sa force. Bien que les personne handicapés ont souffert, les personnes victimes de racisme ont payer de leurs vie cette difference.



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In my opinion, discrimination against disabled people and others forms of discrimination such as racism took root in difference.
A mon avis, la discrimination comme les personne handicapée et les autres formes de racisme comme le racisme, ont pris racine dans la difference.

One hand, discrimination against disabled people and others forms of discrimination have many points in common.
In fact, the disabled and other people who are discriminated against suffer from the inability to live as others.
D'un coté, la discrimination contre les personne handicapée et les autre formes de discrimination ont beaucoup de points communs. En effet, les personnes hadicapées et les autres personnes souffrent de ne pas pouvoir vivre comme les autre
For example:
A person who is disabled has trouble finding a place to park, if he finds one at all.
Moreover in the world of work, it is difficult when you are disabled, because only a few establishments have the necessary struture to be accessible for disabled people.
Also discrimination against Blacks is hard. Black people couldn't ride in the same bus as whites. They didn't have the same rights and they were slaves. Whites had the rights of life or death over a Black. Is this really what freedom is? In the world of work, a person is selected on his name.

People are afraid, afraid that they will not be seen as equals through the eyes of others. It is the unknown that makes people afraid, they don't understand how a person can be different from them. Les personnes ont peur, peur de ne pas voir leurs reflets au travers des yeux des autres.C'est l'inconnu qui fait peur aux gens, ils comprennent pas qu'une personne puissent etre differente d'eux ( je n'arrive pas a traduire cette phrase , les temps des verbes me gene )

However, discrimination against disabled people has always been less violent than racism. Racism has killed many people, such as the most infamous: Ku Kux Klan. This group not only killed Black people but also terrorized them by burning their houses at night.

Therefore, we can conclude that discrimination against disabled people can be compared to other forms of discrimination, because this discrimination is based on physical and other differences, and they all have suffered.
But, we have to judge the degree of this discrimination and its impact.
Although disabled people have suffered, the victims of racism have paid with their lives for this difference .
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