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Old 06-04-2008, 06:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Je dois rendre un devoir dans le cadre de mon bts, est que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mes fautes svp? Le but étant d'imaginer un entretien de vente:
- « May I inform you madam ?
- Yes, thank you. In fact, I’m looking for some presents for my children. I have a ten year-old daughter and a three year old son. I want you to show me your best seller. I don’t want to spend too much money, so propose me some cheap clothes.
- Ok. Do you like red color ? Because I have just received a beautiful dress, not expensive, it costs only fifteen euros.
- Yes,I do. Wonderful ! And what about my son ?
- For your son, I think that a flowery shirt and a pair of jeans could be great. Look at this model.
- It’s exactly what I want.
- Would you like to see something else madam ? At the moment, we have a promotion on tee-shirt with long sleeves, would you like to see them ?
- No, thank you. I have all that I need.
- So if you want, Follow me at the till. How do you want to pay ?
- I will pay by credit card, do you need my identity card ?
- No, I don’t.
- How much is it for all the things I have took ?
- Fifty five euros please madam. I give you your till receipt. I hope to see you again in our store. Thank you and have a nice day.
- Bye. »
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- « May I inform you madam ?
- Yes, thank you. In fact, I’m looking for some presents for my children. I have a ten-year-old daughter and a three-year-old son. I would like (ça fait moins direct que want qui signifie 'veut' et would like qui signifie 'voudrait')you to show me your best seller. I don’t want to spend too much money, so propose me some cheap clothes, please.
- Ok. Do you like red color ? Because I have just received a beautiful dress, not expensive, it costs only fifteen euros.
- Yes,I do. Wonderful ! And what about my son ?
- For your son, I think that a flowery shirt and a pair of jeans could be great. Look at this model.
- It’s exactly what I want.
- Would you like to see something else madam ? At the moment, we have a promotion on tee-shirts with long sleeves, would you like to see them ?
- No, thank you. I have all that I need.
- So if you want, Follow me to the till. How do you want to pay ?
- I will pay by credit card, do you need my identity card ?
- No, I don’t.
- How much is it for all the things I have taken ?
- Fifty five euros please madam. I give you your till receipt. I hope to see you again in our store. Thank you and have a nice day.
- Bye. »

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Merci beaucoyp Tulip Red! Super sympa de ta part. Une dernière chose ce dialogue n'est il pas trop léger pour un niveau BTS a ton avis?
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Merci beaucoyp Tulip Red! Super sympa de ta part. Une dernière chose ce dialogue n'est il pas trop léger pour un niveau BTS a ton avis?
C'est quoi en fait le BTS, je ne suis pas en France...
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Seven advice of Mevlana
-In generosity and helping others, be like a river
-In compassion and grace, be like sun
-In concealing others' faults, be like night
-In anger and fury, be like dead
-In modesty and humility, be like earth
-In tolerance, be like a sea
-Either exist as you are or be as you look
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