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SAJAL सजल
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A TWO-LINE RHYME WITH THE MOST ROMANTIC FIRST LINE,
BUT THE LEAST ROMANTIC SECOND LINE My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife, Marrying you screwed up my life. I see your face when I am dreaming. That's why I always wake up screaming. Kind, intelligent, loving and hot; This describes everything you are not. I thought that I could love no other -- that is until I met your sister. Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you. But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the sugar bowl's empty and so is your head. I want to feel your sweet embrace; But don't take that paper bag off your face. I love your smile, your face, and your eyes -- Damn, I'm good at telling lies! My love, you take my breath away. What have you stepped in to smell this way? My feelings for you no words can tell, Except for maybe 'Go to hell.' What inspired this amorous rhyme? Two parts tequila, one part limeJ |
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Cloelia is just really nice
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Yes this poem was fun. Thanks sajalora! But you changed the rhyming word here:
I thought that I could love no other -- that is until I met your sister. Should it be mother or brother? |
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SAJAL सजल
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![]() ![]() And mother is too old for me, not interested in elderly ladies. Sister would be just fine. ![]()
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Turkcerap is a splendid one to behold
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I thought that I could love no other --
that is until I met your sister. hahahaha it is perfect :D:D:D zuha
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"What inspired this amorous rhyme? Two parts tequila, one part lime" That's the part I like the most All the lines are true. Shows how do people feel about the other people. One conclusion: love, as it is understood, does not exist. |
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SAJAL सजल
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Yup, love for your partner is nothing but desire for sex. that's what I think. People realize this pretty late.
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