Christou

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This video is interesting as it raises a burning issue of the world in which we live. Indeed, it leads us to wonder if polar bears are in danger, it is because of the ice melting.
On the one hand, we can't but acknowledge that the eco-system is in danger and that the existence of polar bears on the Hudson Bay is under threat. Indeed, as the air temperature in spring has been warming each decade several degrees, glaciers on the Hudson Bay begin melting. So, polar bears which go hunting in winter are forced ashore earlier to feed. However, there is not only polar bears which are in danger, but the entire eco-system. For example, the ice melting will have as a result the disappearance of certain animal species, notament navy, as seals, and the modification of the way of life of inhabitants of this region.
On the other hand, we must bear in mind that the ice melting also as a global impact. Indeed, from my point of view, if glaciers continue to melt so quickly, the level of oceans is going to increase very fast also. Moreover, eleven most big cities of the world are situated in easily flooded zones. There is no doubt that if it occured, millions of persons should make an exodus to avoid this disaster.
To conclude, the ice melting is responsible for important turnovers which put in danger the people but also the fauna and the flora, which is in the polar regions or in the global scale.

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