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Old 12-03-2004, 04:03 PM   #7 (permalink)
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you have a space between your $ and 8.
and what's wrong with that?? It's done quite often.

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permits us to remember

very clumsy. let us remember OR reminds us of : both were correct.

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true values of life.
incorrect

It shows that in life: extra, useless word

and especially not happiness.

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is something marvellous in life

something marvellous in someone's life was OK

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something that we can’t buy.

and it cannot be bought

someone who is a millionaire

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people who we love so as to happy


The_FD had it mostly right:

"It's enough to do what we like and to be surrounded by people we love, so as to be happy. "

or, I would say: It's enough to do what we like and to be surrounded by people we love. It's enough to make us happy.
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