“Money can’t buy happiness”: this quotation permits us to remember true values of life. It shows that in life, we can’t buy everything with money, especially not happiness. In my opinion, happiness is priceless. The joy of being a father, being a mother or being a god mother is something [deleted "of"] marvellous in life [deleted "of" and rearrainged it] and something that we can’t buy. It’s true that money makes life easier, but that is only a component of happiness. We can say that it is a superficial aspect of life. I think that someone who is millionaire can be as happy as someone who earns $ 8 a day. [I would reverse this sentence for style purposes and write "I think that someone who earns $ 8 a day can be as happy as someone who is a millionaire."] It’s enough of make what we like [I think here you mean It's enough to do what we like.] and be surrounded by people who we love so as to happy. In the society in which we live, we believe that to be happy, it is always necessary to buy more and with this mentality, people don't know really[would say"don't really know"] what happiness means.
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