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Originally Posted by jeff
شوكرا على موضوع الجيد جدا
وكان فعالا وموفيدا كثيرا
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Small corrections
- Shukran takes no waaw :
شكرا
- Since "al-jayyed" takes "al", then "mawdoo3" has to de defined too.
- Mofeedan doesn't take waaw either.
- Structure: You can't really start the second sentence with "wa"..
Basically you said "thanks for the good topic. And it was efficient and very helpful". "And" and the past tense aren't good.
So all in all, I'd suggest:
شكرا على الموضوع الجيد. إنه فعال و مفيد جدا.
You are doing great