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Old 11-29-2004, 06:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I am too lazy today -it's too long. Needs some work.

As you mentioned spelling, I advise a very good - free - Internet spell checker: http://www.iespell.com
[does not work on this site, they must have disabled some setting]

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Vintage and Classical Zimmer

Sorry, I don't know the topic, but I think it should be "classic"

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to take holidays on quiet place like paradise islands
common error: it's take a vacation
a quiet place like Paradise Islands [maybe The Par.... ... , I don't know those]

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Hollywood is still its best area
not sure what you mean? ... is still the best place ?

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Hearing the four movie score he done this year
listening to ... scores he has done

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cannot be described as a new All of his filmmusic mark

I don't understand are you missing some ponctuation ?

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... to Middle-ages area to revesit the arthurian scene ...

the whole sentence needs ponctuation. I would say "to the Middle Ages to revisit" , upper case for Arthurian.

and things

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will gain fans or loose ones but rather if he will able to change his style to match the cred of the movie
will gain or loose fans, .... cred ?

I stop for now - I've done my good deed for the day.

It needs a lot of work.
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