Man, it's too long. I will do a bit, others will do a bit.
I am a present iup msg student.: you better explain that in full, I don't have any idea of the meaning
a very great chance a great opportunity
Cela s'inscrit dans la logique de mon parcours universitaire even in French, it looks wrong to me. This sentence is just floating there, unconnected.
Praha I would say Prague.
city of the world, in the world
too long ... sorry. maybe later. A bit here and there:
drop in communism the fall of ....
nealy
regim.
challenge man. : NO
Before studying at the IAE Lyon 3, better explain that. Not known oustside of France.
temporaries; part time workers
I play football since I was 6 years old.
I have been playing soccer since the age of 6.
coahing football diplomas.
player players
and fastly I obtained directive post like head of category and technic head of club. very bad phrasing...
thanks to my acquintance : my knowledge
but never I lost confidence : I never lost confidence
to success success is a noun, the verb is succeed
That's not all, that's a start.
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