Bonjour ! J'ai un travail d'expression écrite à rendre
pr mardi. Je l'ai fait mais j'aimerai que qqn corrige mes fautes, s'il y en a !
Merci d'avance !
Mon texte:
“Money can’t buy happiness”: this quotation permit us to remember true values of life. It shows that in life, we can’t buy all with money and especially not happiness. In my opinion, happiness is priceless. The joy of being father, being mother or being god mother is something of marvellous in life of someone and that, we can’t buy. It’s true that money make life easier but that is only a component of happiness. We can say that it is a superficial aspect of life. I think that someone who is millionaire can be as happy as someone who earns $ 8 a day. It’s enough of make what we like and be surrounded by people who we love so as to happy. In the society in which we live, we believe that to be happy, it is always necessary to buy more and with this mentality, people doesn’t know really that happiness means.