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come, come in, take this seat, play (with) your guitar, play the guitar, sing me a song, any one you want, it doesn't matter, it's what I need tonight, I'm not sure I'm able to feel something at the moment, just to hear your voice, stay here just for the song if it's simpler(/easier) for you, I feel the abstract, it's full of things, my box of feelings, you are directly plugged into my veins, we can close our eyes, we don't have to do anything, taste this wine, give me a kiss, tell me goodbye if you want to but don't close the door, I'm (turned over?)
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Bonjour,
Les phrases en rouge me paraissent bizarres..."I'm unsure I' able to feel anything"
Jamais "something" quand il y a négation dans la phrase.
"plugged into my veins" ne me parait pas idiomatique. Je vois le sens que tu veux y donner en français .. " connected straight to my veins" ptet - et encore - pas sur - faudrait demander a un natif -
Alors pour bouleversé (turned over c'est pas bon) je dirais "overwhelmed" plutot.
Voila
