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Old 04-03-2006, 06:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hi, nallatu,

I've noticed another possible mistake.

It does have a role that is not its primary role and while we have other legislation like the human tissue act that explicitly lives out eggs and sperm.

"lives" should read "leaves" since it's a long sound. "Leaves out" = exclude

I didn't notice the italic words before.

commodification- from the word commodity, meaning treating something, here it refers to the human eggs and sperm, as commodity, things sold on the market.

lot of time full- workload is almost full, almost no time left, very busy

bloody mad - typical English expression, very angry

Btw, do you think this is a paid job or homework?

If I were a native English speaker, I guess I might not be bilingual or trilingual.
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