Wow, nallatu, you've done a great job, since you're not a native English speaker, from my memory.
In Hong Kong, they won't consider non-native English speakers for transcription posts.
I'll try to supplement based on your work.
The underlined parts are basically correct, according to my ears.
However, I have doubt about this one:
And in America for example, eggs can change hands
dropped to 50 thousand dollars per cycle.
I think, "dropped" should read
"for up to" , since the price is increasing, not decreasing.
My suggestions to the blanks in the last paragraph:
– But I think if you look at the material, which comes from the US clinics in particular, that yes there is a certain amount of pressure put in terms of
give to give to life and so forth. But, I think it’s also the case that does simply a lot of
ignorance about what the risks are. I mean the process is actually quite laborious, you have to shut down women’s own menstruous cycle. This involves administering drugs, which can have quite harmful effect. It can be risky.