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Old 03-28-2006, 08:43 PM   #5 (permalink)
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If you will allow me, I would just change a few things

could get in serious troubles= could get in serious trouble
Indeed, not later than yesterday = Indeed, no later than yesterday
two teenagers might have seen him in company with a delightful young lady = two teenagers are said to have seen him in the company of a delightful young lady
The fresh couple would then have rent a suite in the famous “Paradise” hotel and stayed there all night long (seems they are going all the way!). = The couple would then have booked a room in the famous “Paradise” hotel (It seems they don't do things by halves!) and stayed there all night.
to be disloyal? = to be somewhat unfaithful to his wife?
currently undergoing a trade gap = currently undergoing some serious financial difficulties
to look for some comfort somewhere else than the conjugal nest = to look for some comfort outside the conjugal nest
spends her days under the sun = spends her days (her time) in the sun
a famous brand of flavour = a famous brand of perfume
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