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Originally Posted by jujuly25
This day was the last summer day, because my last day on the beach.
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Maybe: "This day was the last of summer, because it was my last day on the beach."
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Originally Posted by jujuly25
Although the sky was still blu, the clouds passing in front of the sun was giving me shivers.
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"Although the sky was still blue, the clouds passing in front of the Sun were giving me shivers."
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Originally Posted by jujuly25
Ah ! I didn’t introduce myself ! I’m jujuly25 and I give you two indications on my personality: I like the sun and my favorite color is blue.
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"Ah ! I didn’t introduce myself ! I’m jujuly25 and I give you two cues on my personality: I like the Sun and my favorite color is blue."
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Originally Posted by jujuly25
I stop there, you will have the opportunity to discover me better through the pictures that I will share with you on this photoblog."
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Maybe: "I'll stop here and give you the opportunity to discover more about me through the pictures that i share through this photoblog."