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NAR · 02-24-2006, 04:48 PM

Bonsoir!

Je ne sais pas trop si c'est ce dont a quoi vous vous attendiez... mais voici les quelques corrections que j'ai apporté.

Philip (stare) stared speechlessly at number 9, Hellebore Close .

The Queen (try) tryed to get the key into the keyhole .
The Queen tried to get the key into the keyhole.

She asked "Charles , darling , (you+ever+use ) you has ever used that sort of key ?".
She asked "Charles, darling, have you ever used that sort of key?"

William and Harry (laugh) laughed when Charles , unable to unlock the front door , (boot) booted it furiously .

The door finally (open) has opened
The door finally opened.

"I (never+see) have never seen such a mess !" said Charles ,
"This house (not+be) wasn't lived in for years !"
"This house has not been lived in for years!"

"Good Lord ," said the Queen , "I (never+do) have never done any housework in my whole life ..this is dreadful !"
She (start) has started to cry .
She started to cry.

02-24-2006, 04:48 PM	#3 (permalink)
NAR Simply the Best Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 474 NAR has a spectacular aura about	Bonsoir! Je ne sais pas trop si c'est ce dont a quoi vous vous attendiez... mais voici les quelques corrections que j'ai apporté. Philip (stare) stared speechlessly at number 9, Hellebore Close . The Queen (try) tryed to get the key into the keyhole . The Queen tried to get the key into the keyhole. She asked "Charles , darling , (you+ever+use ) you has ever used that sort of key ?". She asked "Charles, darling, have you ever used that sort of key?" William and Harry (laugh) laughed when Charles , unable to unlock the front door , (boot) booted it furiously . The door finally (open) has opened The door finally opened. "I (never+see) have never seen such a mess !" said Charles , "This house (not+be) wasn't lived in for years !" "This house has not been lived in for years!" "Good Lord ," said the Queen , "I (never+do) have never done any housework in my whole life ..this is dreadful !" She (start) has started to cry . She started to cry.
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