02-23-2006, 02:00 PM
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Simply the Best
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 474
NAR has a spectacular aura about 
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Bonsoir!
Je propose quelques modifications, quoique la dernière phrase est un peu ambigue:
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-A qui ce ballon a t-il bien pu appartenir ?
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To whom could this ball have belonged?
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Whose ball could it possibly have been?
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-Lorsque le train arriva, peu de monde en descendit, moins encore y montait.
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When the train arrived, few people got off and even fewer got on it.
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-L'astre au milieu du ciel de mars tâchait pâlement de s'y refléter avant d'y être bu.
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The star at the centre of the March sky barely mirrored onto it before being soaked up.
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