Too long ... so I just jump to the end.
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In the one hand, we will have to devote most of our energy to non-economic purposes. We will have to use our freedom newly acquired by doing things useful for society
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On one hand, .... our newly acquired freedom...for Society
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by solving his economic problem, human being will be able to leave his old. ..
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By solving our economic problems, we will be ...
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With the technological improvement, we will have to share as widely as possible the little work we still will have to do.
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does not sound right.
Thanks to technological improvements.
What do you mean by "share as widely as possible" ? 
There won't be much work to do, and it will be done by fewer people ?
I stop now. May come back later. ... from the beginning.