Only one or 2 little points - in my opinion [my french is quite rusted]:
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turned a comer quite suddenly
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["comer" I suppose was a typo for "corner"]
"tout a coup, tourna du coin de la rue."
I don't think means "décent", rather "vrai ou juste"
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Ever since a year ago, 2052.
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"jamais" est en trop. Simply: "depuis 2052 - il y a un an"
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The tombs, ill-lit by television light
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" Les tombes, mal eclairees par la lumiere des télévisions."