Bonjour tous les connectés! Que quelqu'un ait pitié de moi!!
J'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger et enrichir mon texte !
Je remercie très très sincèrement ceux qui m'aideront car ce travail est à rendre pour DEMAIN ! ( j'ai mis entre guillemets ce que je ne savais pas dire et en gras ce qui me semblait faux mais il est très probable qu'il y ait d'autres fautes) Je dois rendre ce texte le plus idiomatique possible.
En voici quelques extraits :
To illustrate my idea about life rules, I will take as an example the document "Class Rules". Indeed, one of school rule prescribes that we have to stick up our hand if we would like " prendre la parole.
In my opinion, it's a mark of respect towards our classmates and our teacher,
it's allows the latter to make the lesson in good conditions (dans les meilleurs conditions possibles). Besides, without that rules you couldn't communicate.
A class (un cours) should "se dérouler dans le silence le plus total" As for me,it's inconceivable that
a form should progress in the noise and in the disorder.
I think the rule in "Class rules" mentionnating that we mustn't
go in for any singing, dancing, sports or whatever outside school for 2 months till the exam is nitwitted.
As far as I'm concerned, it's no participating in other activities that will make you fail your exam, it's useful and
helps to blossom and to relax after revisions
As Roger says it in "Yellowstone park" we had better keep our temper if we encounter a bear, this one
ought to assault because an animal is able to feel our
fear.
Voila pour aujourd'hui!
Un grand Merci à tous ceux qui m'aideront
