Bon j'ai changé pas mal d'expressions mais voilà ce que ça pourrait donner :
I think rules are very important to assure the respect of each other. Rules should be established in every school because without rules there would be no respect.
For example the rule number eight, which mentions that it's forbidden to walk on the right in corridors because there could be some rushes.
To my mind, these rules are important because they maintain order in school. In the document "Yellowston park" the park ranger tells to visitors they better not to run away if they meet a bear
(t'a commencé au présent donc tu continues au présent). He also tells them that in case/if the bear attacks, they shall fall to the ground and
play dead. (perso je trouve ça un peu weird mais je paux pas te dire peut etre que c'est juste)/act (/behave) as if they were dead. As far as I’m concerned these rules must be used to warn visitors from the danger.
In our class, we have to do our homeworks everyday. In my opinion it’s a good thing because it makes us improve our level so that in the end of the year it'll be better than it actually is.