Bonjour !
Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger un petit essai en anglais. J'ai essayé de trouver mes fautes ( j'ai misen gras ce qui me semblait faux mais il doit certainement rester encore des fautes): le voici:
I think rules are very important
for the respect of each other. It's ought to put rules in every school.
If there were not these rules, there wouldn't be respect.
For example the rule number eight, that explains us that it's forbidden to walk on the right in corridors, because there could be
some rushes.
To my mind, these rules are important they keep the order in the school.
In the document "Yellowston park" the park ranger tells to visitors they had not better to run away if they meet a bear. He tells also them tha if the bear attacks, they should fall to the ground and play dead.
As far as I’m concerned, these rules must be used to warn the visitors
from the danger.
In our class, we have to do our homeworks everyday. In my opinion, it’s a good thing because our level will be better
in the end of this year than
in the beginning.
Merci de votre aide et à bientôt !
