I like your poem, Cisky. It's very cute.
I bolded/shortened what I thought would sound better.
it's of course my opinion, you yourself or others might feel diffrently...
My goodbye for/to you
My goodbye TO you-
a few words
polishes eyes.
A forced smile
a breath of cold AIR
for each moment
you turn to see
if my mouth
IS STILL smiling at your LOSE (?)
while my heart
RESTRAINS its last shout
because it sees
the sweatest part of itself
going away.
You will go back
because thought is live (LIFE?)
but my mind consoles me
EVEN THOUGH I DON't like
THE THOUGHT OF losing YOU
the moment IS lovelier
KNOWING YOU ARE going away
BUT FOR THE MOMNET
I AM IN YOUR embrace.