Bonjour !!
Voilà g un gros problème .[color="Red"]
A l'école, on nous a demandé de faire une petite redac sur le thème suivant " what are rules for ? What is their purpose?". Il faut y intégrer 4 expressions pour exprimer l'opinion comme i think..ect
G commencé mais je crains que ce que j'ai écrit ne veuille pas dire grd choz en anglais. Je vs prie alors chers connectés à m'aider à corriger ma rédac avt que je ne la rende . (attention les fautes !... je suis débutante!)
Vs pouvez également rajouter des arguments !
Lorsk k'entre parenthez vs voyez (ce ke g voulu dire..) c ke je ne sait pas comment formuler la phrase.
Voici ce que j'ai écrit et que j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez :
Rules...here we are a theme which is worth being debated in my opinion. In spite ofthe bad opinion that we accord to justice,could we do without it for all? And why a such rejection of what is fair? Maybe because it restrains us in our freedom whether it's a matter of life rules or safety rules .
Certain rules often derive from laws, they're approved by justice then. It means we should respect them as well .
Otherwise, it would be the principle of " the strongest's law" ( la G voulu dire la loi du+fort
) which would dominate. Well, but in that case, there wouldn't be power anymore because there always will be a stronger man to stand in for another previous one. And to my mind, a unstable power is not a power. So, in order to avoid that, everybody, citizens or not is duty-bound to submit to some rules to permit thus ( =ainsi ?) to get everybody "on the same step of equality" ( la G voulu dire "sur le meme pied d'égalité")
Whether we like it or not, rules are an integral part of our life.
I think rules can sometimes a guarantee for our security. they show us the behaviour to adopt in certain situations.
Indeed, they guide the persons who stray from the point toward the right way.
However, as far as I'm concerned I feel that a few of rules are abolutely insane !
Voila je vais m'arrêter là en espérant que qq1 d'assez gentil pourra me corriger et ainsi peut-être apprendre de nvlles choz .
Bonne traduction !