Bon voilà ce que je propose, mais attend quand même la relecture d'un anglais de langue maternelle, c'est toujours mieux
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Hi, i'm in
high school and i am 16 years old. We go to school from 8a.m. to 5p.m.
everyday except on Sunday. All of our classes are
mandatory and
we are devided into groups to help people in difficulty. We also have
an hour and half to eat.
I love music! I am listening to music whenever and wherever: in my bed at night, in the morning when I wake up, in the bath, when I go to school and when I come back. Every wednesday I have a hip hop course and then I sing! Did I tell you I lived in Paris, right next to the arc de triomphe, that is to say just next to the most beuatiful avenue in the world! My friends and I use to go shopping, to the movie theatre and to walk at night and this so wonderful avenue! My school is a historically classified monument and is very well known due to celebrities who studied there. Our president Jacques Chirac is an example! The hall is named Eiffel hall, don't you know why? because Mr Eiffel himself buildt it, just as he created the Eifeel tower!
paris
has a lot of monuments, a long story and
its past is
too long to explain what i know about
it in this e-mail.
Moreover i must go to do my homework because
after i have a party...Here in france students do not have jobs like you, so after we are done with our homeworks we can do what we want... so i say good night to you and i look forward to meeting each other...!