Suggestion de traduction
Bonjour,
Bon, tu as quand même fait l'effort de traduire par toi-même, alors je vais essayer de t'aider.
Voici ma suggestion (je ne nie pas le fait qu'une autre traduction puisse être plus appropriée) :
Ingrid was still sleeping in the bedroom. Rigaud sat down the leg of the bed and gazed at that smooth and childish face. He knew he would never recover his sleep. He came and leant on the balcony edge. From there, he could keep watching over her. Ingrid's left cheek was leaning back against her outstreched arm. Her hand was streaming into space. He heard the clatterings of the hooves that heralded the coming of the hackey (carriage), [... tu sembles avoir oublié un passage...], that late? The commotion was getting closer and he bent over the balcony in the hope of seeing the white horse go by. But a clump of pines was hiding the bend from sight in the road to the Cape.
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