Bon, encore une petite question
Je vous voudrais rajouter ça:
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I demonstrated that in my previous internship at the xxx Company by leading a project which brought a US$ 190000 financial profit at its end.
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Cela te semble correct niveau grammatical et syntaxique?
Et je pensais remplacer
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My fields of interest are mainly technical,for instance, products of industrialisation or production management including purchasing, logistics or project management.
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My fields of interest are numerous, for instance, products industrialization, logistics, production management, purchasing or project management.
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, est ce que ma proposition est bien construite?
Merci d'avance!
