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raiisha · 10-11-2005, 12:59 PM

I will be graduating in July 2006 from the University of Technology of Belfort-Montbeliard, France, with a French Engineering Degree (equivalent to a master) in Industrial Engineering.
Since August, I am an exchange student at Korea Advanced Institute of Science and Technology (KAIST), Daejon, South Korea.(WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY EXCHANGE STUDENT?)
Before going for my graduation, I have to do a six-month internship, starting as from January 2006.
My fields of interest are technical,for instance, products of industrialization or production management, but also cover other areas, like purchasing, logistics or project management(I didn't understand the idea you want to convey here)

I really appreciate Korea as well as Korean culture which have always fascinated me and therefore, I would like to do my internship in this country.
[COMPANY] is well-known in Korea being involved in many activities and as such, I would very much like to offer my technical know-how to you.
My previous internships and jobs has led me to developing relational(YOU MEAN COMMUNICATION SKILLS?) skills with people practising different jobs (engineers, financial, working...) and my stay in Korea enabled me to adapt to various cultures.(YOU MEAN YOU HAVE ALREADY BEEN IN KOREA?)I am convinced that my strong technical education in Industrial Engineering, coupled with these capacities of adaptation, communication and perseverance will enable me to successfully carry out the tasks that you will entrust to me.

I am looking forward to discuss with you as soon as possible about my educational credentials and specific experience which will undoubtedly benefit [COMPANY].
Feel free to contact me at the number or email listed above.

J'ai essayé de corriger les erreurs bien que j'ai modifié quelques trucs mais j'ai pas bien compris certaines choses(ceux que j'ai mises en rouge)

10-11-2005, 12:59 PM	#2 (permalink)
raiisha Senior International Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Mauritius Posts: 143 raiisha is an unknown character at this point	Hello I will be graduating in July 2006 from the University of Technology of Belfort-Montbeliard, France, with a French Engineering Degree (equivalent to a master) in Industrial Engineering. Since August, I am an exchange student at Korea Advanced Institute of Science and Technology (KAIST), Daejon, South Korea.(WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY EXCHANGE STUDENT?) Before going for my graduation, I have to do a six-month internship, starting as from January 2006. My fields of interest are technical,for instance, products of industrialization or production management, but also cover other areas, like purchasing, logistics or project management(I didn't understand the idea you want to convey here) I really appreciate Korea as well as Korean culture which have always fascinated me and therefore, I would like to do my internship in this country. [COMPANY] is well-known in Korea being involved in many activities and as such, I would very much like to offer my technical know-how to you. My previous internships and jobs has led me to developing relational(YOU MEAN COMMUNICATION SKILLS?) skills with people practising different jobs (engineers, financial, working...) and my stay in Korea enabled me to adapt to various cultures.(YOU MEAN YOU HAVE ALREADY BEEN IN KOREA?)I am convinced that my strong technical education in Industrial Engineering, coupled with these capacities of adaptation, communication and perseverance will enable me to successfully carry out the tasks that you will entrust to me. I am looking forward to discuss with you as soon as possible about my educational credentials and specific experience which will undoubtedly benefit [COMPANY]. Feel free to contact me at the number or email listed above. J'ai essayé de corriger les erreurs bien que j'ai modifié quelques trucs mais j'ai pas bien compris certaines choses(ceux que j'ai mises en rouge)
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