Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger les fautes d'orthographe ? Merci d'avance
Le sujet : A few month later, the young woman writes to her wealthy parents about her decision to live with an improverished jazz musician?
15th April 2003
Dear Dad, dear Mum,
It was kind of you to write to me.
I'm very sorry I
haven't written for so long, but
an extraordinary thing has happened !
I've met a man. ( Mum,
are you satisfied now ? It has been a long time that you
wanted me to meet somebody !) I met Peter in a jazz club
on the Fulham Road. Peter was the pianist (Dad are you happy that he is a musician
like you ?).
The bar was rather gloomy ! As soon as I entered, I wanted to
leave, but... Peter was
there! He played
the piano, calmly. He was so elegant, so mysterious. I thought that we were made for each other. Whatever he
did, I was already in love with him !
When he took his break we spoke together, he comes from South East London
where he lives in a small
flat.
He admitted to me
a few weeks later that he wasn't a professional pianist.
In fact, he
was looking for a job. Some
weeks later, he found a job
working in a butcher's.
We have been seeing each other for 3 months now. Then I decided to
invite him to live with me in my
flat to South Kensington. He accepted and will move in, in 2 weeks. He sold his
flat, and with his money we will
do up my flat. We will buy a new sofa and we will paint the bed room
yellow. Peter is
pleased because I have a piano.
Weeks pass and we both agree with each other!
(si tu veux dire qu'ils s'entendent bien je propose "we both get on really well together")
There's no fix the date of the marriage left...
(- désolé cela ne se comprend pas en anglais ! si tu veux dire il ne reste plus qu'à fixer la date du marriage je suggère "Now we just have to set the date for the wedding !!")
Lots of love Madie
Merci de votre aide
Laure