Correction de traduction
Bonjour,
Pouvez vous me corriger ma traduction c'est pour un oral en anglais en classe de 1ère
Merci
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I am going to speak to you about my journeys that I so realized that the journeys which I would like to make.
I am going to speak to you first of all about my journey in Poland, which I realized approximately three years ago, in the city of Cracow one of the most important cities of Poland, this city is simply magnificent at the level of the architecture, since 1978 she(it) is classified heritage(holdings) world of the humanity by UNESCO. There are many of monumen. There are many monuments we can speak about saint's basilica about Marie built in XIV ème siecle of a Gothic style. There are also the appearances(mines) of Wieliczka who is the most former(ancient) saltmine of Europe. Of Europe there is a center of conference of more than one thousand places in 125m underground. Of more a church is built in hundred metres deep everything is in salt that it is about the ground, the staircases, the statues of paintings(boards), or still the chandeliers(lustrums); classified heritage(holdings) world of UNESCO in 1978. Numerous personalities visited this church Jean Paul II, George Bush … I also visited the extermination camps of Aushitsx Birkenau which remain a visit the most testing of my life, the horror of the inhumanity Nazi, people died for the madness of a man.
I also visited Budapest the capital of Hungary which is a beautiful country maybe less attractive at the level of the architecture but much warmer in term of human contact with regard to Poland or people are cold and distant, in more in Hungary many persons have French people notions, I keep(guard) a good memory(souvenir) of these two countries rather similar by their cultures..
There is still numerous countries which I would like to visit who(which) are especially on the American continent, the USA in particular New York which remains a dream a culture so different the megalomania. Argentina, Peru, Bolivia, and Mexico stay dreams, I cannot say to you why these countries attract(entice) me. All simply a dream
" The one who does not travel does not know the value of the men(people). " (Moorish proverb)
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