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vanais · 01-30-2008, 11:49 AM

Bonjour!

je suis actuellement en DUT GEA à Lyon. Je souhaiterais l'an prochain partir étudier 1 an en Ecosse. J'ai rédigé mon CV et ma lettre de motivation en anglais, mais bien que mon niveau d'anglais soit plutôt bon pour une française, je reste française... Aussi si pouviez y jeter un coup d'oeil et me corriger, me donner des conseils notamment sur le contenu de la lettre, je vous en serais très reconnaissante.
Merci d'avance!

Anaïs

lettre de motivation :

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am willing to apply for a place as student in your University for the next school year.

Currently I am a student in the IUT A which belongs to the University of Lyons. I have been learning management for two years and by the end of this year I will obtain my diploma.

At the same time, I enjoy learning languages. I passed the First Certificate in English issued from the University of Cambridge four years ago. I also had the chance to visit some parts of Europe, such as Spain, the Netherlands, Germany and Great Britain.

Moreover, this would be the opportunity for me to discover the Scottish culture. I have been learning English for almost nine years but I still lack knowledge about the different cultures of the English-speaking countries. There are approximately only five years left before I finish my studies and I think it is time for me to deepen it at this stage of my school level. Besides in the context of globalization a school year abroad is not optional anymore, it is a necessity especially in careers related to management.

These are all the reasons why I permit myself to solicit you in order to appear among your students next year. As well as all the advantages your University will able to provide me, this collaboration will permit you to benefit from my seriousness and my skills.

I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

CV :

QUALIFICATION

Since September, 2006 : DUT GEA in Lyons (two-year management course)
July, 2006 : Baccalauréat scientifique, section européenne (the equivalent of British A levels with special emphasis on sciences and languages)
June, 2004 : Passing of the First Certificate in English
September, 2003 - June, 2006 Studies at the International School of Lyon

WORK EXPERIENCE :

July - August, 2007 : Seasonal work in Chazay d’Azergues's town hall
December, 2002: One week work placement in a optician's (Chazay d’Azergues)
April, 2001 : One week work placement in a nursery school (Chazay d’Azergues)

SKILLS :

Languages : French : mother tongue
English : advanced
Spanish : good knowledge
German : basic knowledge
Computing : Mastery of office automation softwares : Word, Excel and Powerpoint

INTERESTS AND OTHER EXPERIENCES :

Other expériences :
Mathematics and English lessons, level : Secondary school, for 3 years
Humanitarian project in favour of a Moroccan school since April, 2007
Leisure :
Practise of theatre
French comedies

01-30-2008, 11:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
vanais Brand New Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1 vanais is an unknown character at this point	correction CV + lettre de motivation Bonjour! je suis actuellement en DUT GEA à Lyon. Je souhaiterais l'an prochain partir étudier 1 an en Ecosse. J'ai rédigé mon CV et ma lettre de motivation en anglais, mais bien que mon niveau d'anglais soit plutôt bon pour une française, je reste française... Aussi si pouviez y jeter un coup d'oeil et me corriger, me donner des conseils notamment sur le contenu de la lettre, je vous en serais très reconnaissante. Merci d'avance! Anaïs lettre de motivation : Dear Sir or Madam, I am willing to apply for a place as student in your University for the next school year. Currently I am a student in the IUT A which belongs to the University of Lyons. I have been learning management for two years and by the end of this year I will obtain my diploma. At the same time, I enjoy learning languages. I passed the First Certificate in English issued from the University of Cambridge four years ago. I also had the chance to visit some parts of Europe, such as Spain, the Netherlands, Germany and Great Britain. Moreover, this would be the opportunity for me to discover the Scottish culture. I have been learning English for almost nine years but I still lack knowledge about the different cultures of the English-speaking countries. There are approximately only five years left before I finish my studies and I think it is time for me to deepen it at this stage of my school level. Besides in the context of globalization a school year abroad is not optional anymore, it is a necessity especially in careers related to management. These are all the reasons why I permit myself to solicit you in order to appear among your students next year. As well as all the advantages your University will able to provide me, this collaboration will permit you to benefit from my seriousness and my skills. I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely CV : QUALIFICATION Since September, 2006 : DUT GEA in Lyons (two-year management course) July, 2006 : Baccalauréat scientifique, section européenne (the equivalent of British A levels with special emphasis on sciences and languages) June, 2004 : Passing of the First Certificate in English September, 2003 - June, 2006 Studies at the International School of Lyon WORK EXPERIENCE : July - August, 2007 : Seasonal work in Chazay d’Azergues's town hall December, 2002: One week work placement in a optician's (Chazay d’Azergues) April, 2001 : One week work placement in a nursery school (Chazay d’Azergues) SKILLS : Languages : French : mother tongue English : advanced Spanish : good knowledge German : basic knowledge Computing : Mastery of office automation softwares : Word, Excel and Powerpoint INTERESTS AND OTHER EXPERIENCES : Other expériences : Mathematics and English lessons, level : Secondary school, for 3 years Humanitarian project in favour of a Moroccan school since April, 2007 Leisure : Practise of theatre French comedies
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