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"Dear Sir,
I wish to <be>
apply for a French assistant
post in a British school. I
am<(pas de contractions à l'écrit, encore moins pour ce type de lettre) currently studying foreign languages: English and Spanish, at the University of La Sorbonne, in Paris. I am planning to prepare the PGCE to become a French and Spanish teacher. Before beginning this course, I would like to get some professional experience working as a foreign language assistant. Then I would be able to begin the PGCE course on a good basis.
I
have already worked<(present perfect obligatoire) with a <little girl of>
seven year-old little girl for two years
, assisting her in her homework. It was a very good experience. Moreover, I always dedicate myself to others. For example, I was elected as a « junior district delegate » for two years and I was responsible for collecting food products for a beaten women centre. I also worked in a medical assistance. I was in charge of helping insure
d people who had accidents during their holidays
, organising their repatriation to France. It supposed an important psychological help. Furthermore, I
am presently taking charge of a website that I created for the students of my <promotion>
class:
Paris IV LEA Licence 3. I inform them of the new events which
have occurred in the university, I put some courses on line but also some professors’ messages.
I always <give evidence of>
show seriousness in all that I <begin>
undertake, and I am a patient and autonomous person. I am already imagining <how>
what kind of exercises I could do to make the French courses
both fun and interesting.
In addition, I am settling
down in Britain definitely because my husband is living in Bristol. Consequently, I would be very grateful if you could allow me to work in a primary school <of>
in Bristol. Thank you for your time and consideration.
I <hope>
look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
faithfully."
Bonne chance.
