Bonsoir,
Ce n'est pas si mal finalement...
Corrections et ajouts en majuscules.
Nicaut NODDED exclaiming:
"Ah! you're from here, I THOUGHT SO!
"Yes/Indeed. I was born there, I grew up there. I will come back there when IT IS TIME TO DO SO.
Get me information about thESE<(pluriel) young people.
Nick would have LIKED to know the reason of this curiosity but that would have been useless. The man STOOD up and put ON his hat.
"Do you STILL stay A FEW days?"
"I AM takING the train again immediately/RIGHT AWAY. IT IS NOT ADVISABLE FOR ME TO BE SEEN AROUND HERE, FOR THE MOMENT.