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Old 11-07-2007, 01:28 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by CaoimheDargan View Post
Sort of a poem:

"Dark like the dead sea"
"Immortal like an elve"
"Cold like an eagle"
"Doom like an prisoner"
"Legend like a myte"

"Hunted by enemies"
"And soon catch up with the past"
"There's no way out"
"Only way in"

Hmm... poems don't translate well at all I'm afraid. I can translate it (with a bit of tweaking) but it will lose all it's sense of poetry, rhythm, etc...

Chomh dorcha leis an Mhuir Mharbh (as dark as the dead sea)
Chomh neamhbhásmhar le sí* (as immortal as an elf*)
Chomh fuar le h-iolar (as cold as an eagle)
Chomh daortha le príosúnach (as doomed as a prisoner)
?????? (I don't understand this part "Legend like a myte")

Fiachtar le naimhde (hunted by enemies)
Agus tagtha suas leis an t-am atá thart go luath (and caught up with the time that is finished** soon)
Níl aon bealach amach (there's no way out)
Níl ach bealach isteach (there's only a way in)

*There are no 'elves' in Irish/Celtic tradition, only the 'sí' or fairies. The elf is from Germanic tradition, I think.
** There is no word for the past in Irish - you have to use a phrase, such as the old-times, that times that are over, the time that is spent
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