Et voilà le texte corrigé:
My parents arrived to America in 1990. This photo was taken at night during the housewarming, they were wearing traditional clothes: the Sari. Indian clothes are colored, while in America, people wear occidental clothes.Before coming in America, my parents were living in India, they came in America for the “American Dreams”. When my parents arrived to Wisteria Lane in 1980, they bought a typical American house with many windows, painted in white and that had vast gardens because they liked nature as in India. This is the country where my parents have lived 30 years. My parents spoke to me much about India. Then I decided to leave to travel over there. India is located to the East of Pakistan. My parents were from Bangalore, it’s the south of India. In this city, there was the remainder of my family. The travel took 2 days: a 15 hours flight and 1 day of car. Bangalore is so different from Wisteria Lane; there were no buildings, few roads, lot of trees, the life was relax because there were fewer cars, fewer pollution thus . . . no stress!
Par contre, j'ai mal compris ce que tu voulais dire par "there was the remainder of my family"
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علم لغة، تجتنب بلاهة حرب
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