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My parents were arrived to America in 1990. This photo was taken the night during the housewarming, they wearied traditional clothes: the Sari. Clothes are colored, while in America, people wear occidental clothes.
Before come in America, ma parents lived in India, they were come in America for the “American Dreams”. When my parents, were arrived to Wisteria Lane, in 1980, they bought a typical American house, many windows, white painting, vast gardens, they like nature as India.
This is the country where my parents were lived during 30 years. My parents spoke to me much about India. Then I decided to leave in travel over there. India is in the right of the Pakistan. My parents were from to Bangalore, it’s in the South India. In this city, there was the remainder of my family. The travel length 2 days: airline during 15 hours, 1 day of car. Bangalore is so different to Wisteria Lane, there was no buildings, few roads, lot of tree, the live was relax because few cars, few pollution thus . . . no stress!
En vous remerciant d'avance