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cecyl · 09-26-2007, 07:15 PM

Hi

I'm french
Can you help me to correct my poetries
of my compendium "yahve" (on my blog)
The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ?

Λ. GOD'S SPEAKING TO US

An ocean without storm, Is there
An eternal & sinful life, Is there
A soul in every creature, Is there
A love beyond real, Is there
An all universal poetry, Is there
An hard spiritual way, Is there
An all-present & lurking god, Is there

cecyl, the little britain poet

09-26-2007, 07:15 PM	#1 (permalink)
cecyl love nature spirituality Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: vannes, morbihan, france Posts: 7 cecyl is an unknown character at this point	Correction Λ - cecyl, the little britain poet Hi I'm french Can you help me to correct my poetries of my compendium "yahve" (on my blog) The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ? Λ. GOD'S SPEAKING TO US An ocean without storm, Is there An eternal & sinful life, Is there A soul in every creature, Is there A love beyond real, Is there An all universal poetry, Is there An hard spiritual way, Is there An all-present & lurking god, Is there cecyl, the little britain poet Last edited by cecyl; 09-26-2007 at 08:31 PM.
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