Bonjour,
Serait-il possible de corriger le texte que j'ai fais ?
Et le problème, c'est que je ne sais jamais quand mettre "The" "a" "an", et ça me joue souvent des tours...
Avez-vous des astuces ?
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Quote:
A man interviews a girl whose name is Shareen. She came from Pakistan (Extreme-Orient). During his childhood, she remembers that other children where savages. Now she lives in London in Great Britain. She excepted because the weather is showery while in the Pakistan the weather is good, always sun, no rain therefore in lodon.
Some people on the street think that she doesn't speaks english, in reality she speaks very good English owing to on Pakistan, English is the second language at school after Urdu.
His intergration is easy due to she's wearing western clothes as occidentals.
She likes London because she can meet people, is a free country, studies, get married while in Pakistan is not free country, don't express your idea, don't freedom of speech.
Standart of living in London is lower. Live is high that who is differ from Pakistan. But now Pakistan has changed, life changed. It's more and more modern,there are new industries, oil.
Shes misses her family, friends.
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Je n'emet aucun jugement, je reprend le voc que le prof nous a donné
D'avance merci