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Old 06-04-2007, 10:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
Jenshen
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Default Is my english correct, please!

Hello everyone,
I would like to ask if my small poeme in english is correct.

Thanks a lot beforhand!

Here it is:

Am I stranger to jazz?
Sitting on the banc,
Walking on the street,
Smyling by myself and always thinking
(About) so strange feeling this music gives me, for sure!
Rhythm, joy, soul’s extas
You’re welcome to the land of Jazz.

Jazz in Tokyo, Jazz in Kiev,
Jazz in London or in Negev,
Jazz in Moscow, Jazz in Benjin
Everywhere the swing is engin.

Am I stranger to Jazz?
They could ask you:”Are you strong
To play and exploise your scat in all those tones”?
Darling, do you feel the freedom
That this music gives you out?
Leaving east, west,north or south
Play it, swing it, sing it out!
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