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Old 05-23-2007, 09:18 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by jierbe31 View Post
Well, on second thoughts, I guess it would be better to enrich this sentence with a few verbs such as : "For two years, I didn't do anything about art, didn't go to exhibitions nor Biennale or Documenta, didn't read art magazines nor recorded any video. I just said no thanks."
What do you think?
Hope it helps anyway.
Thank you very much! I chose this version with the verbs... Merci!
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