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nathans · 02-19-2007, 02:31 PM

Bonjour a tous,j'ai eu un travail de compréhension en anglais que j'ai fais mais je pense avoir fait de grosses fautes..si vous pouvez m'aider a les corriger ca serait super sympa merci de votre aide.

1/two characters are present in the text:the narrator and ben .Two times are present in the text a past time and a present time : in past time the scene took place an Friday ,the present time is speech time of the narrator.In the text many locations are mentions : the station,the narrator’s office,bakker’s bookshop and the narrator’s home .The met between narrator and ben takes place at bakker’s bookshop.The text deals about a mystery notes wrote by ben that he wants give it to the narrator.The narrator have an external point of view it’s an external narrator.

2/ben is a student and the narrator works for a journal

3/The two characters knows each other well because the narrator invited ben in his home and he seems to be closer with ben but it was a long time that they can’t see.

4/’can ‘ means the capacity while ‘will’ means an order.

5/the reasons which prompted the narrator to meet ben are:
-the insistance of ben for meet the narrator
-the mystery reason that ben hide to see the narrator

8/The narrator thinks that ben is deconnected from reality because he seems doesn’t know ben any more , he have notice the mystery behaviour of ben because he feels that ben is tense.

9/perturbed and confused are two adjectives that conveying the same feeling.

10/ the mystery in the passage is notice by the fact that we can’t know the subject of the notes of ben and we can’t know if these notes are really important or not.Furthermore we can’t know why ben is anxious and affraid

11/the humour of the narrator and the thoughlessness which the narrator take the situation shows that he does not take ben seriously

12/the justaposition of the last two sentences shows an contrast between irony and tragedy

13/With the last sentence we can think that the narrator will feels remorse because he does not take ben seriously and maybe he will be wants what happen exactly to ben.The last sentence open a new situation,a new plot .

bonne fin de journée et merci d'avance

02-19-2007, 02:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
nathans Growing Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 17 nathans is an unknown character at this point	Correction-Anglais Bonjour a tous,j'ai eu un travail de compréhension en anglais que j'ai fais mais je pense avoir fait de grosses fautes..si vous pouvez m'aider a les corriger ca serait super sympa merci de votre aide. 1/two characters are present in the text:the narrator and ben .Two times are present in the text a past time and a present time : in past time the scene took place an Friday ,the present time is speech time of the narrator.In the text many locations are mentions : the station,the narrator’s office,bakker’s bookshop and the narrator’s home .The met between narrator and ben takes place at bakker’s bookshop.The text deals about a mystery notes wrote by ben that he wants give it to the narrator.The narrator have an external point of view it’s an external narrator. 2/ben is a student and the narrator works for a journal 3/The two characters knows each other well because the narrator invited ben in his home and he seems to be closer with ben but it was a long time that they can’t see. 4/’can ‘ means the capacity while ‘will’ means an order. 5/the reasons which prompted the narrator to meet ben are: -the insistance of ben for meet the narrator -the mystery reason that ben hide to see the narrator 8/The narrator thinks that ben is deconnected from reality because he seems doesn’t know ben any more , he have notice the mystery behaviour of ben because he feels that ben is tense. 9/perturbed and confused are two adjectives that conveying the same feeling. 10/ the mystery in the passage is notice by the fact that we can’t know the subject of the notes of ben and we can’t know if these notes are really important or not.Furthermore we can’t know why ben is anxious and affraid 11/the humour of the narrator and the thoughlessness which the narrator take the situation shows that he does not take ben seriously 12/the justaposition of the last two sentences shows an contrast between irony and tragedy 13/With the last sentence we can think that the narrator will feels remorse because he does not take ben seriously and maybe he will be wants what happen exactly to ben.The last sentence open a new situation,a new plot . bonne fin de journée et merci d'avance
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