02-13-2007, 08:55 AM
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Correction d'un texte :)
Salut,
Je devais analyser une publicité, j'ai donc sauvagement arraché un pub Renault dans le Télé loisirs. Pourriez-vous me corriger les quelques fautes ?
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The picture is an add of Renault. I can see a Formula one and a car (Renault Scénic).
The Formula one is blue and yellow. I can see sponsors on the Formula one. (Elf: this company makes gas, oil, etc. I-mode who appertain to Bouygues telecom. Michelin makes tyres. telefonica is like to Bouygues Telecom, it's a phone compagny. Chronotech is a firm who makes jeweles.
On the left sid of Formula One, I can see two rewards, the first is:"Manufacturers Formula one World champion: Renault 2006" and the second is "Drivers Forumula One World champion: Fernando Alonso 2006. It's the FIA (Fédération Internationale de l'automobile" wich awarded these recompenses
In the background, I can see a flag blue (not black and white because the blue ist the color of Renault.
Inthe top left hand corner, there are an sentance "Les jours renault F1 team, du 2 au 31 janvier". It's the periode during which this sale campaign is broascastes.
On the bottom right hand corner, there are the logo of renault, it's a rectangle yellow with a logo gray.
On the bottom left hand corner, there are conditions of tha add.
Then the meant that the Renault Scenic is as competitive as the Formula One. The best technology used in the Formula One is used in the Renault Scenic, whence the slogan "Quand renault gagne, vous êtes gagnant".
the price of the car is in obviousness because the add point out that the price is low in relation to other cars.
The advertising writer use a contrast between the blue (cold color) and the yellow (hot color). Its' for draw the attention on the price.
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Merci 
Last edited by Cacahuete586; 02-13-2007 at 05:41 PM.
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