Le texte n'est pas (trop
) mauvais, mais il y a certaines expressions qui ne passent pas tres bien...
Boite a pizza = pizza box
Une experience du monde du travail (ou experience en entreprise), temps que l'on est etudiant, c'est "internship" pas "work experiment".
J'ai reecrit la premiere partie de ton texte. Je n'ai pas compris ce que tu voulais dire par "it can inhibit the mistrust of anti-ads". La seconde moitiee contient trop d'erreurs et de phrases que je ne comprends pas ... tu devrais la retravailler
Bonne chance!
I did my first year internship with the Noname communication agency, located in the east suburb of Marseille. This firm has been created in April 2004 by two friends, Mister X, web designer, and Mister Y, a sales and marketing specialist. It's a limited liability company with a 15000 € capital.
The activities of Noname are very varied:
-First of all, there's the ATOABOX. This project consists in printing ads on pizza boxes to make them less expensive. Market research proved this niche to be cost effective and the market is large: 3 billion pizza boxes are used every year in France (10kg per person).
The main advantages of that product are the fact that
it can inhibit the mistrust of anti-ads, and generate profit from great events like the soccer World Cup. The added advantage here is to expose a large number of persons to the advertisement since pizzas are often consumed in large groups in front of the TV during these events. The ultimate goal for the ATOABOX is to make it free.
Their other activities include:
- Web design
- Silkscreen printing on promotional objects such as lighter, pen and bracelet.
- Design of logo, booklets and leaflets.
- Promotional DVDs for companies.