Bonjour,
Avant tout je me
présente, je m'appel Pierre, j'ai 17 ans et je suis éléve en premiere STG. Je viens de découvrir ce forum et il est très bien conçu: l'entraide ! J'essayerai d'apporter de l'aide dans la section "espagnol" vu que je maitrise bien la langue
Voivi mon texte (c'est une description et analyse d'une photo); l'anglais par contre, pfiouuuu!
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We may deduce in this document is a picture because there as several plans was painting.
As in introduction, I can see a land empty, deserted, ti inspire the solitude.
Fiest, I can see a low horizon wich has a diferent meaning, it doesn't give an impression of escape because it leads to bad weather. The sky is transformed into a big stoned wall, like medieval prison.
Secondly, I can see a strange window in the middle of the wall because she starts on the grass and finishes in the window (in the sky, strange, no ?), it's abstract !
The wall seens take unbreakable it's a finished world and the window represents the open door to the paradise or the new world. Moreover the bird is the symbom of peace.
Thirdly, in the window, I can see the forest, she symbolizes the new world with the wild nature, with no wall, house, man, violence.
I think that the bird will go to the new world.
A column straight organised in left and right side, she are symetrics ( medieval type). She symbolizes the spiritual elevation.
The picture is a mixture between the medieval and modern style.
Finally, they bricks lines are parallels. The ladder represents the separation between the realy world and the paradise (new world).
In conclusion, the target is to put the window in obviousness, in addition it's an abtract picture because the painter mixe landscapes, symbols and effects. That diverts the observer and brings the reflexion on the better world
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Merci beaucoup pour le temps que vous allez consacrer à la correction !